My siblings and I had a 'writing contest' today, based on prompts. (I got a "Writer's Toolbox" for Christmas and it is a.w.e.s.o.m.e.) I decided to share my story here. The first line had to be, "There were seventeen cats in Larry's basement." and I had to include "a weekend in Duluth" and "He was skating on thin ice- that's all I can say."
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There were seventeen cats in Larry's
basement. He took us down there one time while we were over to his
house. Larry was the kind of person with slicked back hair and a
razor sharp part. He was always wearing a bow tie. On the morning
in question his bow tie was sky blue with pink polka-dots. Totally
hideous. We had just finished off an entire bowl of popcorn while
playing Scrabble, and we asked Larry if he had anything to drink. He
smiled a full-tooth grin and beckoned us down into the basement. We
crept down the steps, and Larry flicked the lights on. As our eyes
adjusted we saw to our relief that it was a pretty normal basement.
There was a fridge, some shelves, and a gallon of fruit punch sitting
on the floor. My brother scampered towards the fruit punch, and,
holding it above his head like a magnificent prize, scurried back up
the steps. I turned to follow him when I noticed something. A shelf
was hidden in the dark, almost behind the stairs, but light was
reflecting off of something sitting on it. I took a few steps
forward when Larry spoke.
“Ah, my dear, I was hoping you'd
notice that! Would you like to see more?”
Not waiting for an answer, he flipped
another switch, and the bookshelf was illuminated. But there were no
books. Just three rows of ceramic cats. They were all identical in
every way it seemed. One right after the other, equally spaced; and
dispute being tucked away, perfectly clean of dust. They were quite
small, I suppose, about 5 inches tall. I counted quickly: three rows
of six cats each, minus one on the last row.
“What are they?” I asked.
“They were my late wife's. They
look pretty ordinary, but looks can be deceiving. Each one holds a
little secret. Here, I'll show you.” He flipped the first cat
over, and revealed that it was hollow. Inside was a single, blue
button. He handed it to me, flipped the next one over, and handed me
a small screw. The third revealed a key; the forth, a piece of a
shoelace; the fifth, a sewing thimble. By the time he reached the
end, I had a whole handful of little articles. He turned around to
face me and grinned broadly.
“Do you understand now?”
I looked up at him, deeply confused.
“No.” I looked down at my hands, and back at him. “No, not at
all.”
He laughed cheerfully. “I didn't
expect you too. Now, I'll tell you.”
He took from my hands the little blue
button from the first cat. He rubbed his fingers over it gently.
“This was from Millie's jacket, I mean my wife, of course. She got
this jacket for her eighth birthday. She lived in Vermont, you see,
so getting a jacket was a big deal.” He replaced the button in the
first cat, and then pulled the screw out of the pile in my palms.
“This screw was from her first radio. That was her Christmas
present the year she was fourteen. She loved listening to different
bands and all sorts of music. She kept that radio until after we
were married. At first almost every evening we would turn it on,
push the couch out of way, and dance; just the two of us.”
He took the key from my hand, and held
it up to the light. He chuckled softly. “When we got our first
apartment; dear me was she bad at remembering things; she lost her
key four times that first month. Finally I went to the store and had
the man make me twenty keys to our front door, and then I placed them
randomly around the house. I figured, that way, she was bound to
find at least one of them in her search. We laughed about that for
years.”
Next he grabbed the shoelace. The
edge was frayed, but he smiled when he saw it. “This was part of
the lace off of her ice skates. She ice skated as a child, but I had
never been before. It was on a natural lake, and as I got more
confident I skated farther from the bank. I guess I went too far,
because I hit some weak ice and plunged right into the water. Millie
and our friends scrambled over to me and I got out all right. When
we got back to the lodge people asked if I was okay, and Millie just
laughed and responded, “He was skating on thin ice- that's all I
can say.” That was a joke in our house for many years.”
Slowly, piece by piece, he told me the
story behind each article. A ticket to a theater from their weekend
trip to Duluth; a piece of yarn from their favorite quilt; a scrap of
a newspaper article on their fiftieth wedding anniversary. Finally,
all the memories were back safely inside the cats.
“There were only sixteen items,
though. What is in the seventeenth cat?” I asked. Larry smiled
warmly, and flipped the last cat over. It was empty.
“This,” he said. “Is for all
the memories still yet to be. Because, you see, the importance is
not in the things, but in the life behind the things. When
Millie was dying, she made me promise that I wouldn't stop living and
making new memories. That's the real lesson here, darling.”
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Mr. Larry has long since passed away.
My brother and I grew up, and moved. I don't know what ever happened
to those seventeen cats in Larry's basement. But I know that I'll
never forget to treasure the moments, and the little memories.
Because in the end, those end up being what really matters.
That was really good, Jess! Thank you for sharing!!
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SO GOOD. love love love
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