Last part!
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Characters:
Madelyna – Nobleman
Trilogy’s daughter
Peter – Nobleman
Citrus' slave
Marcus – Madelyna's
betrothed, a soldier
Proconsul Pompous –
Government leader of the city
Army Commander
Harmony - Nobleman
Citrus' slave girl
Scene
11:
The
Guard Station; The night of the Ambush
Commander:
[At the end of a briefing] Does everyone understand their positions?
Good. Let's move! [To Peter and Madelyna standing nearby] Thank you
both for approaching me about this. Hopefully this will go as
smoothly and painlessly as possible. [Commander called away by
guard]
Peter:
[To Madelyna] Are you doing okay? Do you want me to take you home?
Madelyna:
Are you kidding me? This is awesome! I don't want to miss anything!
[Peter
laughs]
[Commander
and soldiers surround Proconsul's house. Peter and Madelyna look on
from nearby. Finally, whispering voices are heard through the night.
Voice
#1: Shh! Quiet, fools.
Voice
#2: Watch the road; I heard a horse drowned in one of those puddles.
Voice
#3: Nonsense; stupid gossips story.
Voice
#4: 'ould be true, doe. Not all those wives tales are false.
Voice
#3: Tell me one that's true.
Voice
#2: A wizard once told me...
Voice
#1: If you all don't shut up, there will be more than one victim
found on the morrow. Got it?
[Silence]
Good.
Now on we go.
[Voices
fade, until suddenly a loud crash is heard]
Voice
#3: Curses, you beasts! The dead even heard that!
Voice
#2: That isn't funny tonight, Curtis.
Voice
#4: He didn't say the “almost dead.”
Voice
#2: Although that applies too.
Voice
#3: Wait, where is Mar... [Interrupted by the sound of a slap and
muffled struggle]
Voice
#1: [Hissing] No names, and if any of you so much as whimper I will
slit your throat. Is that understood!?
[Silence,
then the creak of the outer gate. After all slip through the gate,
and it clangs shut again, the soldiers close the circle surrounding
the block. Finally, the house is surrounded.]
Commander:
[Nods to lieutenant]
Lieutenant:
[Pauses, then yells] Now!
[Instantly
every man in the platoon lights a torch. Shouts and curses can be
heard from the men in the courtyard as they realized their
entrapment.]
Commander:
Make sure none of them get away! Guards, on alert!
Soldier
#1: Sir, I need back up! Some are trying to climb the fence!
Soldier
#2: Over here, two captured!
Proconsul:
[Comes running sleepily from house; rubbing eyes] I say, I say, what
is all this ruckus!
Soldier
#3: Wait, wait! Commander, we have them cornered!
Proconsul:
Will someone tell me what is happening? Why did you have to chose my
house to have a party this late?
[More
noise of chaos]
Proconsul:
[To criminal running by] Say here, dear chap, how are you? Do you
know what's going on?...
[Talking,
noise; fads away...]
Scene
12:
After
the criminals, including Marcus, are captured and being transported
to prison.
Commander:
Peter, Madelyna; the Proconsul and I wanted to come and personally
thank you for your bravery in coming to us about this. You have done
a great duty to your country. You truly are heroes.
Proconsul:
You saved my life. I had no idea ruffians were plotting against me.
How could I ever replay you?
[Madelyna
and Peter look at each other; a silent agreement]
Peter:
Well, I think we have an idea...
Scene
13:
Madelyna
sits on hill overlooking the city; and Peter comes and sits beside
her.
Madelyna:
Oh, hey! Is it official?
Peter:
See for yourself. [Grins; Hands over rolled up document]
Madelyna:
[Scans and reads, before throwing paper aside and throwing her arms
around Peter] Oh, Peter, that's magnificent! I'm so happy for you!
We are now both free from slavery and betrothal. Oh my goodness, this
is so exciting!
[Peter
stands up; pulling Madelyna with him. Once Madelyna is standing,
Peter kneels, still holding her hands.]
Peter:
[Looking up at Madelyna] Madelyna Elisa, I love you. Will you marry
me?
Madelyna:
[Mouth open in surprise] Oh, Peter! [Silence for a second] What
kind of question is that? Of course!! I love you, too.
Peter:
Really, truly?
Madelyna:
There is no one on earth I'd rather have than you.
[Peter
stands, and they embrace.]
[Finis]
(The end)
Aww, this is so sweet! And definitely my favorite part yet!
ReplyDeleteThis was awesome! The ending was so sweet and beautiful! love it!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Jess! Loved the ending! =)
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