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Characters:
Madelyna – Nobleman
Trilogy’s daughter
Peter – Nobleman
Citrus' slave
Marcus – Madelyna's
betrothed, a soldier
Proconsul Pompous –
Government leader of the city
Army Commander
Harmony - Nobleman
Citrus' slave girl
Scene
4:
Nobleman
Citrus' kitchen. Harmony and Peter side-by-side washing dishes
Harmony:
[To Peter] You just missed a beating this afternoon. Why on earth
did you stay out that late?
Peter:
[Handing her a clean dish to dry] I told you, I was just delayed at
the market. Nothing more.
Harmony:
[Laughs] Sure, sure. Just try to be a little more careful next time.
Master was super mad when he had to have someone else serve his
wine. The guest was a man all the way from Rome!
Peter:
Yes, yes, I know I'm on thin ice. Just stop talking about it, okay?
Harmony:
[Light-heartedly] Fair enough. Now you get outta 'ere. I'm sure
you got places you'd rather be. I'll finish up.
Peter:
You don't have to do that. I'll help you finish up.
Harmony:
[Playfully pushes Peter towards door] Get! There isn't much left
anyway.
Peter:
[Grinning; scurries out of kitchen] Thanks!
Harmony:
[Chuckling to self] That crazy, un-tameable boy.
[Peter
jogs out into the street to Trilogy's home]
Peter:
[To self] Oh, I hope her sign is out! Please...please...Oh! Window
empty again. Where is she? She promised she'd see me! I have to
find out.
[Rushes
around to Trilogy's kitchen; slips in door]
Trilogy's
cook: What you be needing, boy? I'm not in the mood for gossip, and
whatever business your master has, do it quick.
Peter:
I have a message for the Nobleman's daughter.
Trilogy's
cook: [Sarcastically] Yah, and I'm her father. You had any message
of sorts it would be delivered at a respectable time by someone a
little higher rank than you and I. We'll have none to do with you;
out, now. No excuse, lad.
[Peter
goes out and waits in an ally. Trilogy’s cook's voice heard
through a window]
Trilogy’s
cook: [To servant] Don't forget to lock 'er up now, ya hear. Thrice
this week I've come morn to the door unlatched. Once more and I'll
report you to Master, ya' hear?
Servant:
You can trust me, Cook.
Trilogy's
Cook: [Snorts] That I know isn't true. But you're still better than
me sticking around all night.
Peter:
[Quietly to self] Ha, let's just see how much of the all-night shift
is being attended to.
Trilogy's
Cook: I'm off. Keep your head on your shoulders, boy.
Servant:
[Under his breath] Whatever, old man.
[Cook
leaves; minutes later servant leaves also. Peter jumps up and sneaks
through unlatched kitchen door]
Peter:
I just need to find the opening to the hall...wall...wall...
pans!
[Clatter
and pots crashing. Peter freezes]
Peter:
Whoo, still quiet... Ah, there is the opening! Now just to get down
this hall without being detected...
[Finally,
Peter reaches a door. He reaches up and quietly knocks.]
Peter:
[whispering] Madelyna! It's me, open up.
[The
door cracked slightly]
Madelyna:
Peter, what are you doing here? We could be caught!
Peter:
I don't care, I had to see you! Just let me in.
Madelyna:
Alright, but we have to be careful; my father might find out.
Peter:
Thank you.
[Once
inside the room...]
Peter:
Why has your sign not been out these last days? I've checked every
night and seen nothing.
Madelyna:
I'm sorry, my father has been forcing me to attend dinners every
night.
Peter:
[with disgust] With Marcus?
Madelyna:
Yes. He mentioned tonight that he wants me to move to a villa in the
country with him.
Peter:
And your father sounded okay with all this?
Madelyna:
Positively thrilled. He says our family is honored to be giving me
away to a man with such high standing.
Peter:
[bitterly] High standing. It's all anyone cares about anymore.
[Madelyna
comes and sits beside Peter. She lays her head on his shoulder]
Madelyna:
I care nothing about high standing. I'd rather have you than Caesar
himself.
Peter:
And I would be more honored than Caesar himself to have you, my love.
[End
Scene]
Scene
5:
Nobleman
Citrus' study
Nobleman
Citrus: Here, slave, go and fetch my ink and pen. I want to
transcribe a letter to the Capital, and you will deliver it when I'm
done.
Peter:
Yes, m'lord. [Exits, then returns]
Your
pen and paper, m'lord.
Nobleman
Citrus: Leave me until I call.
Peter:
As you wish. [Bows, and exits]
This is amazing, Jessica! You need to write more:)
ReplyDelete~Sarah
Your style is really awesome, Jess! I can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteI really like Madelyna. :) I hope we can read more of this soon!
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Love,
Ashley
Hey Jessica! This is pretty awesome, I wish I could write a play like this!
ReplyDeleteJust as a side note, I thought that maybe the dialogue was just a bit off for what time period the story is set in, but that is only my opinion :). I really love how you have included the mental thought process of the characters!